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This is my first submission for The Relativity contest here [link] over at :iconmirz-alt: I will write a small storyline explaining the events as they unfold so watch out for an update. Hell's Razor rescues Dark Flame from the evil Doctor Fagan's clutches. (Updated with story line)

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"But why would the Doctor be so interested in you?," enquired Hell's Razor, as she sliced through Dark Flame's bonds. " He's egotistically evil," she replied, " I recently took an orphaned rich girl under my wing, Annie's her name, when her Uncle, Bruce Payne went missing on an expedition to the underworld's famous caves," she continued. "Bruce Payne?," asked Hell's Razor, " You mean, 'THE Bruce Payne' as in Vampman fame," continued Hell's Razor. "The very same one," replied Dark Flame, "Fagan thinks that he could extract information from me regarding her location so he could hold her for a massive ransom," continued Dark Flame. " That's strange, Sam never mentioned he'd gone missing and I'd have thought she'd have taken Annie on anyway." said Hell's Razor in a rather perplexed tone. "I'm sorry!, but just who is Sam?," asked Dark Flame, curiously. "Ah! she's Bruce's cousin," replied Hell's Razor, " You'd know her better as Vampgal," continued Hell's Razor. " She maybe doesn't know yet, and anyway we thought that Bruce was her last surviving relative. I never knew he had a cousin," stated Dark Flame. " Yeah! well that's possible, especially if it's been kept low key and he may still turn up yet," stated Hell's Razor. "Well I'll have to have a word with this Sam of yours regarding Annie's future, should it turn out for the worst," replied Dark Flame. "You'll get your chance shortly, and we'd better hurry anyway. I've set the plastic to go off in about five minutes time and boy when it goes it'll go good style," said Hell's Razor with some urgency. "Let's get out of here then," said Dark Flame as she fumbled with her bonds. "Leave that until we get clear of this building," said Hell's Razor, grabbing Dark Flame by the arm and pulling her up off the chair. The two of them sprinted out the door and up the steps, past the guards that Hell's Razor had incapacitated just a few minutes earlier. They had just exited the main door when Hell's Razor pointed to the edge of the field and exclaimed," Over there!. That's Sam and the Vamp Hover. Hurry! let's get there before this place explodes." Dark Flame and Hell's Razor sprinted towards the waiting Hovercraft, piloted by Vampgal when the building, where Dark Flame had been held captive, erupted in an explosion of fire and heat so intense that Dark Flame was frightened her hair would be set alight. Opposite to their escape route the Guards in the quonset hut had been alerted by the sudden explosion and had spotted the two superheroines making their escape. Hell's Razor spotted them and nudging Dark Flame she exclaimed," Watch this!." Just as the guards were bursting out of the hut, Hell's Razor reached over to the control pad on her left arm and pressed a button. The quonset hut erupted with a ferocity that shook the ground sending lethal pieces of shattered iron and steel whizzing through the air as a huge fire ball reached for the sky. The guards seemed to take on superhero traits of their own as their mangled bodies soared skywards with the ever expanding fireball. " Now that's gotta be Hell!," exclaimed Hell's Razor gleefully as they continued running towards the Hover and Vampgal.

The End.
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Mood: Joy *Perficio Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much =)
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`mirz-alt Sep 2, 2012   General Artist
This really sounds like an interesting story and I'm eager to see how it all transpired in the beginning. I tend to like non-traditional storytelling, like Pulp Fiction or "telling the end first" so it intrigues me.

I'll save the rest of my comments until after the contest closes. Thanks again for entering.
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Mood: Joy *Perficio Sep 3, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I hope I don't disappoint, and thank you very much =)
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`mirz-alt Aug 30, 2012   General Artist
Quick note to say I saw this. I'm just settling in from having baby, but will comment soon. Thanks for joining!
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Mood: Joy *Perficio Aug 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
No problem. Congratulations on your new addition to the family. =)
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Ooo 3D darkflame :D
great work
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Mood: Joy *Perficio Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much =)
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*Perficio Aug 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I know the story is back to front. Spare a thought for me as I've got to construct it that way. The first two parts of the story will be posted with the forthcoming depictions, presently under construction, in a manner of speaking. Lol! Enjoy =)
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